“Fail to plan and you are planning to fail…”
Although the exams won’t allow for a lot of planning time, spending significant time planning through the course is essential because it trains your mind, helping you to absorb and understand what a good essay feels like.
- In a weekly essay it is much better to spend over an hour planning and then limit writing to 40 minutes than to write for 2 hours without a plan!
- In an exam, 3 minutes spent planning will earn you far more marks than you could earn by writing those few extra sentences.
How should I plan and structure my essay?
Paragraph 1
Introduction: CONTENT: What is the question about – define your terms. CONTEXT: Why is this question being asked and why is it important? COMMENT: Introduce your line of reasoning then as the last sentence of the Introduction, state your THESIS, a clear statement of what your argument (answer) will be, using the wording of the question.
Be very careful with introductions… they are NOT a summary of the entire topic! The purpose is only to introduce your thesis… If you are short of time, this is the paragraph to cut… just state your thesis.
Paragraph 2
This is RA, the strongest Reason in support of your argument, including Authority i.e. scholars and evidence suppoting your argument.
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, with a POINT, EXPLANATION, EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS and EVALUATION and a LINK back to the Thesis. NB: Evaluation here should be positive i.e. “this is persuasive because”…
Paragraph 3
This is also RA, the next strongest Reason in support of your argument, including Authority i.e. scholars and evidence suppoting your argument.
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, with a POINT, EXPLANATION, EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS and EVALUATION and a LINK back to the Thesis. NB: Evaluation here should be positive i.e. “this is persuasive because”…
Of course, you can add as many paragraphs as you have points to make in support of your thesis – or time to write them! 2 is the minimum for A Level.
Paragraph 4
This is DE (a counterclaim, rebutted). Describe and explain who would Disagree with your argument & then Evaluate… explain why you disagree with them (with evidence).
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, with a POINT, EXPLANATION, EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS and EVALUATION and a LINK back to the Thesis. NB: Evaluation here should be negative i.e. “this is not persuasive because”…
Of course, you can add as many counterclaims as there are that need dealing with – or as you have time to write them! 1 is a minimum at A Level.
Paragraph 5
This is your Conclusion. Think TEA: repeat your Thesis and best Evidence, make a call to Action.
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, signpost by writing “in conclusion” then restate your thesis as the POINT, add EXPLANATION & EVIDENCE (i.e. your best reason(s)) then ANALYSE and EVALUATE (make a call to action). Depending on the length of this paragraph, you may wish to finish by LINKING back to the Thesis.
Remember, for more detailed advice on how to write good A Level essays, take my A Level Masterclass, a unique online-course that takes you through it step by step…
Practice Questions
Here is a very long list of potential essay-questions for the OCR A Level, each based on the specification and particularly the questions for discussion points…
https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/05/11/ocr-h573-potential-questions-the-very-long-list/
THE best way to improve your performance – and revise for – A Level RS is to plan/write as many practice essays as you can.
Model Essays…
These model essays are written by me, a teacher with 22 years experience and two Masters’ degrees! They are NOT intended to be what a student should be able to achieve in 40 minutes under exam-conditions… but rather give you an idea of how the question could be answered using the information available to you in an hour or so when you know what you are doing. Many people find them useful.
ai (6) A Level (2) A Level Ethics (9) A Level Philosophy (49) A Level RS (74) Analogy (4) Ancient Philosophical Influences (6) Anselm (12) Applied Ethics (3) Aquinas (25) Aquinas First Way (3) Aquinas Second Way (3) Aquinas Third Way (3) Arguments for God (24) Aristotle (7) atheism (2) bible (24) Boethius (5) Christian Ethics (3) christianity (64) Christian teachings on Poverty (3) Christian Teachings on Wealth (3) Classical Theism (6) Cognitivism (3) Conversion Experience (4) Corporate Religious Experiences (4) Cosmological Argument (8) David Hume (12) Dawkins (6) DCT (3) Death and the Afterlife (5) Descartes (4) Design Argument (4) Determinism (3) Development (3) Developments in Christian Theology (9) Dualism (4) Equality (3) Equity (3) Ethics (20) faith (30) Form of the Good (3) Four Marks (3) Free Will (3) Free Will Defence (4) Freud (4) Future of Christianity (3) Gaunilo (4) god (27) God's Attributes (7) Grace (3) history (15) jesus (24) JL Mackie (3) Kant (13) Kantian Ethics (4) Liberation Theology (4) Logical Problem of Evil (5) Marxism (5) Materialism (4) Meaning (5) Metaphysics (3) morality (5) Mystical Experience (3) Natural Law (4) Nature of God (11) Non-Cognitivism (3) Omnipotence (3) Omniscience (4) Ontological Argument (8) philosophy (59) Philosophy of Language (5) Philosophy of Religion (51) Plato (7) Plato's Forms (3) politics (11) Problem of Evil (11) religion (29) Religious Experience (8) Religious language (4) Religious Studies (76) RS (75) Secularisation (3) secularism (5) Situation Ethics (3) Soul (3) St Augustine (5) Swinburne (7) Symbol (4) Symbolic Language (3) Teleological Argument (6) Theistic Personalism (4) Theodicies (3) Theodicy (3) theology (9) thomas-aquinas (2) Threats to Christianity (3) Varieties of Religious Experience (5) William James (7) William Paley (3)
Topic by topic…
Ancient Philosophical Influences
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/critically-assess-platos-analogy-of-the-cave-as-an-explanation-of-reality-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/09/30/platos-theory-of-the-forms-is-unconvincing-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/06/03/platos-theory-of-the-forms-is-unconvincing-discuss-40-2/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/10/14/assess-aristotles-four-causes-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/09/30/critically-compare-platos-philosophical-approach-with-that-of-aristotle-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/06/02/critically-compare-platos-form-of-the-good-with-aristotles-prime-mover-40/
Soul, Mind & Body
- Any talk about a separate or separable soul rests on a category error. Critically evaluate this claim [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/12/10/there-is-no-such-thing-as-a-soul-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/11/18/critically-assess-the-claim-that-human-beings-have-an-immortal-soul-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/01/04/religious-faith-requires-belief-in-a-separate-soul-discuss-40/
Arguments from Observation
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/critically-evaluate-the-kalam-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/11/18/aquinas-cosmological-argument-proves-that-god-exists-critically-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/01/09/to-what-extent-does-aquinas-cosmological-argument-successfully-reach-the-conclusion-that-there-is-a-transcendent-creator-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/06/03/aquinas-first-cause-argument-successfully-proves-the-existence-of-god-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/critically-evaluate-the-classical-teleological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/critically-evaluate-aquinas-fifth-way-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/03/05/it-is-more-likely-that-the-universe-was-the-result-of-chance-than-that-it-was-designed-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/01/13/critically-compare-the-cosmological-and-teleological-arguments-for-gods-existence-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/07/05/to-what-extent-does-hume-successfully-argue-that-observation-does-not-prove-the-existence-of-god-40/
Arguments from Reason
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/21/critically-evaluate-the-ontological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/09/29/st-anselm-succeeded-in-demonstrating-gods-existence-from-reason-alone-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/12/18/gaunilo-successfully-defeats-anselms-ontological-argument-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/06/26/gaunilo-shows-that-atheists-are-not-fools-discuss/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/09/17/critically-evaluate-kants-criticisms-of-the-ontological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/05/01/critically-assess-kants-criticisms-of-the-ontological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/07/12/assess-the-view-that-the-ontological-argument-depends-on-logical-fallacies-that-cannot-be-overcome/
Religious Experience
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/06/01/critically-evaluate-william-james-definition-of-religious-experience/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/religious-experience-is-a-good-pointer-to-the-existence-of-god-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/04/03/critically-evaluate-the-view-that-religious-experience-is-the-best-basis-for-belief-in-god-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/04/02/although-it-is-reasonable-to-believe-in-god-on-the-basis-of-a-religious-experience-you-yourself-have-had-it-is-wrong-to-believe-on-the-basis-of-other-peoples-reports-crit/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/examples-of-mystical-experiences-should-be-considered-valid-religious-experiences-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/06/01/corporate-religious-experiences-are-less-reliable-than-individual-religious-experiences-discuss/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/01/02/conversion-experiences-do-not-provide-a-basis-for-belief-in-god-discuss-40/
Problem of Evil & Suffering
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/12/19/critically-discuss-the-theodicy-presented-by-john-hick-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/irenaeus-successfully-defends-god-against-charges-of-creating-or-allowing-evil-and-suffering-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/03/05/critically-compare-the-logical-and-evidential-aspects-of-the-problem-of-evil-as-challenges-to-belief-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/03/11/critically-evaluate-st-augustines-theodicy/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/04/16/critically-evaluate-st-augustines-attempt-to-resolve-the-logical-problem-of-evil-40/
Nature & Attributes of God
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/09/14/the-arguments-for-the-existence-of-god-do-nothing-to-support-the-god-people-actually-worship-critically-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/10/16/critically-assess-the-belief-that-god-is-omnipotent-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/09/26/an-omnipotent-god-could-have-created-free-beings-who-always-choose-what-is-right-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/11/07/can-god-act-in-the-world-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/11/05/assess-boethius-view-that-divine-eternity-does-not-limit-free-will-40-marks/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/10/20/boethius-proved-that-gods-omniscience-is-compatible-with-human-free-will-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/04/27/human-freedom-is-not-compatible-with-divine-omniscience-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/10/22/anselms-four-dimensionalist-approach-successfully-explains-gods-action-in-time-discuss-40/
Religious Language
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/02/01/the-via-negativa-is-the-best-way-to-approach-religious-language-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/06/26/the-best-approach-to-understanding-religious-language-is-through-the-cataphatic-way-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2024/04/09/assess-the-view-that-aquinas-doctrine-of-analogy-enables-us-to-speak-significantly-about-god-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/aquinas-successfully-demonstrates-that-religious-language-should-be-understood-in-terms-of-analogy-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/04/18/religious-language-is-meaningless-discuss-40/
- Critically evaluate Flew’s claim that religious claims are meaningless because they are unfalsifiable. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/04/03/a-symbolic-understanding-of-religious-language-renders-religious-discourse-incomprehensible-critically-evaluate-this-claim-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/06/10/critically-compare-aquinas-and-wittgensteins-approaches-to-defining-meaning-in-religious-language-40/
DCT Augustine & Human Nature
- There is no distinctive human nature. Discuss [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/01/04/augustines-theory-of-original-sin-has-no-place-in-the-21st-century-world-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/03/23/critically-assess-the-significance-of-augustines-teaching-on-human-relationships-before-the-fall-40/
DCT Death & the Afterlife
- “A loving God would not elect a limited number of people to salvation.” Discuss [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/06/13/critically-assess-the-view-that-in-christian-teaching-all-people-will-be-saved-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/critically-discuss-different-christian-interpretations-of-what-heaven-is-like-40/
DCT Knowledge of God
- To what extent can God’s existence be proven through Natural Theology? [40] | Logos
- “Knowledge of God only comes through Jesus Christ” Critically evaluate this claim. [40] | Logos
DCT Person of Jesus
- Jesus was not only a teacher of wisdom or political liberator; He was the unique son of God.” Discuss [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2026/05/18/jesus-is-best-understood-as-a-teacher-of-wisdom-discuss-40/
- “Jesus was primarily a political liberator.” Discuss [40] | Logos
DCT Christian Moral Principles
- Assess the view that Christians should obey moral commands from the Bible and nowhere else. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/assess-the-claim-that-love-agape-is-sufficient-as-the-only-source-of-christian-ethics-40/
- Assess the claim that love (agape) is sufficient as the only source of Christian ethics. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/05/22/the-bible-is-a-comprehensive-moral-guide-discuss-40/
DCT Christian Moral Action
- Critically evaluate Bonhoeffer’s claim that God’s grace is costly” [40] | Logos
- “Christians should never break the law!” Discuss [40] | Logos
- Critically assess Dietrich Bonhoeffer’s teaching about the Church, with reference to Finkenwalde. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2026/05/18/bonhoeffers-theology-is-not-relevant-today-evaluate-this-statement-40/
DCT Pluralism
- “To what extent has inter-faith dialogue contributed positively to community cohesion” [40] | Logos
- “Scriptural reasoning is not a useful activity.” [40] | Logos
- “Scriptural Reasoning relativises religious beliefs.” Discuss [40] | Logos
- “Redemptoris Missio was not a positive response to the challenges posed by religious pluralism.” Discuss [40] | Logos
- To what extent was “Sharing the Gospel of Salvation” (2010) a positive response to the challenges presented to the Church of England by an increasingly pluralistic society? [40] | Logos
DCT Gender
DCT Secularism
- Freud was right that society would be happier without Christianity. [40] | Logos
- Critically evaluate Richard Dawkins’ critique of religion. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/02/19/secularists-who-say-that-christianity-is-a-source-of-unhappiness-are-wrong-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/12/22/secularists-who-say-that-christianity-is-a-source-of-unhappiness-are-wrong-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/10/30/religion-will-have-no-place-in-22nd-century-britain-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/12/17/secularism-does-not-pose-a-threat-to-christianity-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- “Religious teachings should have no further role in shaping laws relating to sex.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
DCT Marxism & Liberation Theology
- Critically assess Liberation Theology’s engagement with social issues. [40] | Logos
- Critically evaluate the claim that Liberation Theology engaged too much with Marxism. [40] | Logos
- “Marxism and Christianity are more similar than different.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
- “Christianity addresses social issues more effectively than Marxism.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
- “It is right to give the poor a preferential option.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
- “Capitalism is exploitative and dehumanising.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2024/03/05/marx-does-not-offer-a-satisfactory-solution-to-the-problem-of-the-exploitation-of-the-poor-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/01/17/no-true-christian-could-embrace-marxism-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/01/28/orthodoxy-is-more-important-than-orthopraxis-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/02/09/christians-should-not-show-favouritism-or-prioritize-one-group-over-another-discuss-40/
Natural Law
- Critically evaluate Aquinas’ approach to moral decision making. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/12/27/critically-evaluate-natural-law-as-an-approach-to-making-21st-century-moral-decisions-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/the-five-primary-precepts-are-the-most-important-part-of-natural-law-discuss-40/
- Natural Law is the only guide a Christian needs when making decisions about euthanasia. Evaluate this claim. [40] | Logos
Situation Ethics
- “In situation ethics, moral decision-making is entirely individualistic and subjective.” Discuss [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/04/30/critically-evaluate-situation-ethics-as-an-approach-to-making-decisions-about-euthanasia-40/
- Assess the claim that love (agape) is sufficient as the only source of Christian ethics. [40] | Logos
Kantian Ethics
- To what extent is Kantian Ethics only concerned with duty? [40] | Logos
- Kant’s Categorical Imperative is very helpful in moral decision-making. Discuss [40] | Logos
- Kant’s categorical imperative is very helpful in moral decision-making. Discuss [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/11/29/kantian-ethics-is-too-abstract-to-be-used-in-practical-moral-decision-making-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/10/16/kantian-ethics-is-the-most-useful-approach-to-making-decisions-in-business-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/a-kantian-approach-to-issues-arising-from-sexual-ethics-is-the-most-useful-discuss-40/
Utilitarianism
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/03/11/critically-discuss-the-view-that-utilitarianism-is-the-best-approach-to-making-21st-century-decisions-40/
- “Utilitarianism always justifies companies in adopting environmentally responsible practices.” Discuss [40] | Logos
- According to utilitarianism, a business should focus on profit-making and nothing else. Discuss [40] | Logos
- The amount of pleasure produced is the only factor determining whether a sexual act is right. Discuss [40] | Logos
- Evaluate the view that utilitarianism provides the best approach to sexual ethics. [40] | Logos
Applied Ethics: Euthanasia, Business Ethics, Sexual Ethics
Euthanasia
- Natural Law is the only guide a Christian needs when making decisions about euthanasia. Evaluate this claim. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/04/30/critically-evaluate-situation-ethics-as-an-approach-to-making-decisions-about-euthanasia-40/
- “Critically assess the importance of the sanctity of life in decisions about euthanasia.” [40] | Logos
- Critically assess the importance of the sanctity of life in decisions about euthanasia. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/07/10/is-there-really-a-moral-difference-between-killing-somebody-and-letting-somebody-die-40/
Business Ethics
- “Capitalism is exploitative and dehumanising.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2026/05/21/utilitarianism-always-justifies-companies-in-adopting-environmentally-responsible-practices-discuss-40/
- According to utilitarianism, a business should focus on profit-making and nothing else. Discuss [40] | Logos
- “Utilitarianism is more useful than Kantian Ethics when it comes to deciding whether to blow the whistle.” Evaluate this statement [40] | Logos
Sexual Ethics
- Critically evaluate the view that conscience is the best guide when making decisions about sex. [40] | Logos
- “Religious teachings should have no further role in shaping laws relating to sex.” Discuss. [40] | Logos
- The amount of pleasure produced is the only factor determining whether a sexual act is right. Discuss [40] | Logos
- Evaluate the view that utilitarianism provides the best approach to sexual ethics. [40] | Logos
Meta-Ethics
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/06/in-meta-ethics-the-term-good-has-an-objective-factual-basis-discuss-40/
- We all know the difference between right and wrong; it is just common sense. Critically assess this claim. [40] | Logos
Conscience
- Critically evaluate St Thomas Aquinas’ view of the conscience. [40] | Logos
- Assess Sigmund Freud’s view of the conscience. [40] | Logos
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2025/01/29/the-word-conscience-is-best-understood-as-an-umbrella-term-for-various-factors-involved-in-moral-decision-making-discuss-40/
- We all know the difference between right and wrong; it is just common sense. Critically assess this claim. [40] | Logos
- Critically evaluate the view that conscience is the best guide when making decisions about sex. [40] | Logos
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