“Fail to plan and you are planning to fail…”
Although the exams won’t allow for a lot of planning time, spending significant time planning through the course is essential because it trains your mind, helping you to absorb and understand what a good essay feels like.
- In a weekly essay it is much better to spend over an hour planning and then limit writing to 40 minutes than to write for 2 hours without a plan!
- In an exam, 3 minutes spent planning will earn you far more marks than you could earn by writing those few extra sentences.
How should I plan and structure my essay?
Paragraph 1
Introduction: CONTENT: What is the question about – define your terms. CONTEXT: Why is this question being asked and why is it important? COMMENT: Introduce your line of reasoning then as the last sentence of the Introduction, state your THESIS, a clear statement of what your argument (answer) will be, using the wording of the question.
Be very careful with introductions… they are NOT a summary of the entire topic! The purpose is only to introduce your thesis… If you are short of time, this is the paragraph to cut… just state your thesis.
Paragraph 2
This is RA, the strongest Reason in support of your argument, including Authority i.e. scholars and evidence suppoting your argument.
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, with a POINT, EXPLANATION, EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS and EVALUATION and a LINK back to the Thesis. NB: Evaluation here should be positive i.e. “this is persuasive because”…
Paragraph 3
This is also RA, the next strongest Reason in support of your argument, including Authority i.e. scholars and evidence suppoting your argument.
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, with a POINT, EXPLANATION, EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS and EVALUATION and a LINK back to the Thesis. NB: Evaluation here should be positive i.e. “this is persuasive because”…
Of course, you can add as many paragraphs as you have points to make in support of your thesis – or time to write them! 2 is the minimum for A Level.
Paragraph 4
This is DE (a counterclaim, rebutted). Describe and explain who would Disagree with your argument & then Evaluate… explain why you disagree with them (with evidence).
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, with a POINT, EXPLANATION, EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS and EVALUATION and a LINK back to the Thesis. NB: Evaluation here should be negative i.e. “this is not persuasive because”…
Of course, you can add as many counterclaims as there are that need dealing with – or as you have time to write them! 1 is a minimum at A Level.
Paragraph 5
This is your Conclusion. Think TEA: repeat your Thesis and best Evidence, make a call to Action.
- Aim to write a nicely structured paragraph, signpost by writing “in conclusion” then restate your thesis as the POINT, add EXPLANATION & EVIDENCE (i.e. your best reason(s)) then ANALYSE and EVALUATE (make a call to action). Depending on the length of this paragraph, you may wish to finish by LINKING back to the Thesis.
Remember, for more detailed advice on how to write good A Level essays, take my A Level Masterclass, a unique online-course that takes you through it step by step…
Practice Questions
Here is a very long list of potential essay-questions for the OCR A Level, each based on the specification and particularly the questions for discussion points…
https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/05/11/ocr-h573-potential-questions-the-very-long-list/
THE best way to improve your performance – and revise for – A Level RS is to plan/write as many practice essays as you can.
Model Essays…
These model essays are written by me, a teacher with 22 years experience and two Masters’ degrees! They are NOT intended to be what a student should be able to achieve in 40 minutes under exam-conditions… but rather give you an idea of how the question could be answered using the information available to you in an hour or so when you know what you are doing. Many people find them useful.
A Level (2) A Level Ethics (7) A Level Philosophy (47) A Level RS (65) Analogy (3) Ancient Philosophical Influences (6) Anselm (12) Applied Ethics (3) Aquinas (20) Aquinas First Way (3) Aquinas Second Way (3) Aquinas Third Way (3) Arguments for God (23) Aristotle (6) atheism (2) Boethius (5) christianity (22) Christian teachings on Poverty (3) Christian Teachings on Wealth (3) Classical Theism (6) Cognitivism (3) Conversion Experience (4) Corporate Religious Experiences (4) Cosmological Argument (7) David Hume (12) Dawkins (6) DCT (3) Death and the Afterlife (4) Descartes (4) Design Argument (4) Determinism (3) Development (3) Developments in Christian Theology (8) Divine Eternity (2) Dualism (4) Equality (3) Equity (3) Ethics (5) Euthanasia (2) Exclusivism (2) Form of the Good (3) Four Marks (3) Free Will (3) Free Will Defence (4) Freud (3) Future of Christianity (3) Gaunilo (4) god (2) God's Attributes (7) Grace (3) Hick (2) Hick's Irenaean Theodicy (2) Inclusivism (2) JL Mackie (3) Kant (12) Kantian Ethics (4) Liberation Theology (4) Logical Problem of Evil (5) Marx (2) Marxism (3) Materialism (4) Meaning (5) Metaphysics (3) Moral Philosophy (2) Mystical Experience (3) Natural Law (2) Nature of God (11) Non-Cognitivism (3) Omnipotence (3) Omniscience (4) Ontological Argument (8) philosophy (23) Philosophy of Language (5) Philosophy of Religion (47) Plato (6) Plato's Forms (3) Problem of Evil (11) Religious Experience (7) Religious language (3) Religious Studies (66) RS (65) Salvation (2) Secularisation (3) secularism (5) Situation Ethics (2) Soul (3) St Augustine (5) Swinburne (7) Symbol (4) Symbolic Language (3) Teleological Argument (6) Theistic Personalism (4) Theodicies (3) Theodicy (3) Threats to Christianity (3) Universalism (2) Utilitarianism (2) Varieties of Religious Experience (5) William James (6) William Paley (3)
Topic by topic…
Ancient Philosophical Influences
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/09/30/platos-theory-of-the-forms-is-unconvincing-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/06/03/platos-theory-of-the-forms-is-unconvincing-discuss-40-2/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/10/14/assess-aristotles-four-causes-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/09/30/critically-compare-platos-philosophical-approach-with-that-of-aristotle-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/06/02/critically-compare-platos-form-of-the-good-with-aristotles-prime-mover-40/
Soul, Mind & Body
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/12/10/there-is-no-such-thing-as-a-soul-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/11/18/critically-assess-the-claim-that-human-beings-have-an-immortal-soul-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/01/04/religious-faith-requires-belief-in-a-separate-soul-discuss-40/
Arguments from Observation
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/critically-evaluate-the-kalam-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/11/18/aquinas-cosmological-argument-proves-that-god-exists-critically-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/01/09/to-what-extent-does-aquinas-cosmological-argument-successfully-reach-the-conclusion-that-there-is-a-transcendent-creator-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/06/03/aquinas-first-cause-argument-successfully-proves-the-existence-of-god-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/critically-evaluate-the-classical-teleological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/critically-evaluate-aquinas-fifth-way-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/03/05/it-is-more-likely-that-the-universe-was-the-result-of-chance-than-that-it-was-designed-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/01/13/critically-compare-the-cosmological-and-teleological-arguments-for-gods-existence-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/07/05/to-what-extent-does-hume-successfully-argue-that-observation-does-not-prove-the-existence-of-god-40/
Arguments from Reason
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/21/critically-evaluate-the-ontological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/09/29/st-anselm-succeeded-in-demonstrating-gods-existence-from-reason-alone-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/12/18/gaunilo-successfully-defeats-anselms-ontological-argument-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/06/26/gaunilo-shows-that-atheists-are-not-fools-discuss/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/09/17/critically-evaluate-kants-criticisms-of-the-ontological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/05/01/critically-assess-kants-criticisms-of-the-ontological-argument-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/07/12/assess-the-view-that-the-ontological-argument-depends-on-logical-fallacies-that-cannot-be-overcome/
Religious Experience
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/06/01/critically-evaluate-william-james-definition-of-religious-experience/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/religious-experience-is-a-good-pointer-to-the-existence-of-god-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/04/03/critically-evaluate-the-view-that-religious-experience-is-the-best-basis-for-belief-in-god-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/04/02/although-it-is-reasonable-to-believe-in-god-on-the-basis-of-a-religious-experience-you-yourself-have-had-it-is-wrong-to-believe-on-the-basis-of-other-peoples-reports-crit/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/06/01/corporate-religious-experiences-are-less-reliable-than-individual-religious-experiences-discuss/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/01/02/conversion-experiences-do-not-provide-a-basis-for-belief-in-god-discuss-40/
Problem of Evil & Suffering (also DCT Augustine’s teaching on Human Nature)
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/12/19/critically-discuss-the-theodicy-presented-by-john-hick-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/irenaeus-successfully-defends-god-against-charges-of-creating-or-allowing-evil-and-suffering-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/03/05/critically-compare-the-logical-and-evidential-aspects-of-the-problem-of-evil-as-challenges-to-belief-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/03/11/critically-evaluate-st-augustines-theodicy/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/04/16/critically-evaluate-st-augustines-attempt-to-resolve-the-logical-problem-of-evil-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/01/04/augustines-theory-of-original-sin-has-no-place-in-the-21st-century-world-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2022/03/23/critically-assess-the-significance-of-augustines-teaching-on-human-relationships-before-the-fall-40/
Nature of God
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/09/14/the-arguments-for-the-existence-of-god-do-nothing-to-support-the-god-people-actually-worship-critically-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/10/16/critically-assess-the-belief-that-god-is-omnipotent-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/09/26/an-omnipotent-god-could-have-created-free-beings-who-always-choose-what-is-right-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/11/07/can-god-act-in-the-world-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/11/05/assess-boethius-view-that-divine-eternity-does-not-limit-free-will-40-marks/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/10/20/boethius-proved-that-gods-omniscience-is-compatible-with-human-free-will-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/04/27/human-freedom-is-not-compatible-with-divine-omniscience-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/10/22/anselms-four-dimensionalist-approach-successfully-explains-gods-action-in-time-discuss-40/
DCT Death & the Afterlife
DCT Secularism
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/02/19/secularists-who-say-that-christianity-is-a-source-of-unhappiness-are-wrong-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/12/22/secularists-who-say-that-christianity-is-a-source-of-unhappiness-are-wrong-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/10/30/religion-will-have-no-place-in-22nd-century-britain-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/12/17/secularism-does-not-pose-a-threat-to-christianity-evaluate-this-statement-40/
DCT Marxism & Liberation Theology
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2024/03/05/marx-does-not-offer-a-satisfactory-solution-to-the-problem-of-the-exploitation-of-the-poor-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/01/17/no-true-christian-could-embrace-marxism-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/01/28/orthodoxy-is-more-important-than-orthopraxis-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2021/02/09/christians-should-not-show-favouritism-or-prioritize-one-group-over-another-discuss-40/
Religious Language
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/02/01/the-via-negativa-is-the-best-way-to-approach-religious-language-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/06/26/the-best-approach-to-understanding-religious-language-is-through-the-cataphatic-way-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2024/04/09/assess-the-view-that-aquinas-doctrine-of-analogy-enables-us-to-speak-significantly-about-god-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2018/04/18/religious-language-is-meaningless-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2019/04/03/a-symbolic-understanding-of-religious-language-renders-religious-discourse-incomprehensible-critically-evaluate-this-claim-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/06/10/critically-compare-aquinas-and-wittgensteins-approaches-to-defining-meaning-in-religious-language-40/
Natural Law
Situation Ethics
Kantian Ethics
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2023/11/29/kantian-ethics-is-too-abstract-to-be-used-in-practical-moral-decision-making-discuss-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2020/10/16/kantian-ethics-is-the-most-useful-approach-to-making-decisions-in-business-evaluate-this-statement-40/
- https://divinityphilosophy.net/2017/03/12/a-kantian-approach-to-issues-arising-from-sexual-ethics-is-the-most-useful-discuss-40/
Utilitarianism
Applied Ethics
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